First Draft

This is the first draft for my music video. I rally like the visuals and the way I have shot it as it is as I planned it. However, some of the negatives are that the narrative is not clear. I am going to film again so I can add more narrative into the video and also I will re-arange it so it is very clear to my targeted audience. Overall I think it is okay but there is still stuff I can improve on.