Music Video Feedback

After showing my first draft to my class I got some feedback from all my class mates and teachers. Also I posted the video on Youtube.com and asked some of my friends on social media to watch it and give me some feedback too.

So these are some of the things people pointed out: 

- the narrative is unclear 

- not enough variety of shots 

- the performance needs to be serrated with narrative footage

- theres a guy (not an actor)  on the tube who looks straight into the camera and laughs.

Feedback from First Digipak presentation

This is all the Feedback which I have copied on one piece of paper. I am currently working on the Elements which need improving. I have also made small changes into things such as swap some of the images round. I have also made a new CD design which is plain matte black with the bands name on it. Also I think the front and back cover work very well together as on the front cover the band is looking at the camera and the back cover you can see the backs of the band members.

Feedback from pitch

This is the feedback I received after my pitch. This made me think about whether my band is Indie or Alternative rock as the song is Indie and I have created an Alternative rock band. I am going to research further into the genre so I understand it better and into more depth. I am going to make a powerpoint with the two sub genres and then decide which suits more- which I think is Indie due to the pace of the song and the appearance of the band. I also need to make sure my narrative is clear to the audience as it is a bit confusing right now as well make sure that it is applied to Goodwin's theory. 

Feedback no1

This is my feedback from one of my teachers with suggestions of what i should do next to help me to create my music video and advertisement for it.